AnonymousThey’re not my favorite, since I have not yet seen one that worked with the canon storyline and the original 3 doujutsus. The OC’s usually seem to have doujutsus that appear very similar to the Sharingan or they have some ridiculous power, like seeing emotions, I don’t really like them.
-Lumos.
AnonymousAs long as they’re follow the storyline, for example, having someone be the Niibi while Yugito is alive or after the Akatsuki have killed her is a big no, but before she was born it could be possible. Don’t make something like a clone or something like that because it doesn’t make any sense, there are only 9 (well 1 or 10 depending on how and when you count the Juubi) so my point is don’t make a Jinchuuriki rpc during Narutos timeline because we all know which ones already have hosts maybe in the generation before such a Tsunades generation or anything older than that but my general advice is just don’t.
-Lumos
(Sorry in advance for the quick drawings! I was anxious to get an opinion, so I drew ‘em up kinda sloppy. Assume that all three are wearing the standard blue sandals, and that the two girls would wear their headbands on their foreheads!.)
—General Info—
Name: Minori Jin
Age: 12
Height: 5’ 4”
Weight: 135
Birthday: January 19th
Good Traits: Very approachable, likes to talk, has a good heart, hard working, understanding, very loving.
Bad Traits: Frustrated easily, compulsive, quick tempered, stubborn and impatient.
Likes: Animals/insects (creatures in general!), spending time with her family, her brother’s cooking, training and getting better at/learning a new skill
Dislikes: Making decisions, when creatures get hurt, feeling useless, getting angry, when people don’t like her
Hobbies: Card games etc. with her dad, origami, stargazing
Fears: disappointing her family
Strengths: Strong-willed, knows her botany (poisons, herbs, etc.!) dedicated, Woldo (Korean weapon!), quite a bit of physical strength
Weaknesses: often rushes into things/speaks without thinking
History: Has always been fairly average at things, and seems to fall behind the shadow of her brother. She doesn’t dislike him for it at all, but gets frustrated with it often. She lives with her brother, Father and Aunt. They are all very close, and love each other a lot.
Her father lived in the Leaf Village for a long time with her Mother, up until she was born. Not long after, the whole fox demon deal happened, and her Mother passed away in battle, along with her Uncle. Later. the family moved to Sand village, probably due to her Father wanting to move forward. They still have another Uncle who lives in Leaf Village.
In the fanfiction this is for, her family is living in the sand village during the Chuunin Exam arc, and her/her team participates. Her family struggles with the betrayal of their original home, but wants to stay loyal to sand as well. It follows through from that with canon. (I’m not too far ahead in the series - I just started rewatching it after several years a few weeks ago, so as I watch I’m figuring things out.)
—Relationships—
Parents: Kenta Jin (Father) and Yua Jin (Mother)
Siblings: Ren Jin (Brother)
Best Friend: Min-Su Yoon, very good friends with Temari
Crush: Rock Lee
Rival: Naruto
Enemy: Not sURE YET??? wahps
Pets: Anda (A very big ninja dog of their father’s.)
—Etc.—
Goals: At this point, she wants to be on an even playing field with her brother. She wants to be taken seriously, and she struggles with controlling her frustration.
Stats:
Weapon: Uses a Woldo, which is a Korean weapon. It is a long pole with a long, curved blade at the end. It is fairly heavy and difficult for some to use and takes a lot of practice.
I’m afraid my character might be too boring because of her lack of ~*~special qualities~*~. I’ve created her for a fanfiction, which focuses a lot on her family relationships and friendships. I’d like her to end with Rock Lee, but I’m still trying to figure out if he would even like her. I figure he would be the one out of anyone to keep her positive, and help her succeed in her training. Is there anything I could add, or do you think she’s okay? (The other two characters I’m submitting are also on her team!)
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I rather like her :D Her design is simple, and usually I don’t recommend this but maybe add some flare? The reason being it looks almost a bit to plain. Otherwise I love the way she’s designed!
Oh goodness, I really don’t like the idea of ninja transferring villages, even if something bad happened. Considering ninja are warriors of their certain villages, transferring to a new one would be difficult.
She seems well balanced personality wise and seems like a sweet girl. I like that you chose a weapon outside the norm for her!
Overall I like her, and I think she’s charming, and Rock Lee deserves a charming girl.
-An
Absolutely! that would be a wonderful and plot following thing to do! so yes, that is the only thing that would be okay to do with an Uchiha rpc unless you intend to bring it back to life then no, All besides 3 Uchihas (that we know of so far) has died in the massacre. For me there are some exceptions like next-gen & pre-gens but never that they come back unless the whole clan comes back in the manga (which I doubt.)U if they do fine, but Uchiha > Massacre > Dead.
-Lumos
Three separate submissions would make it easier on us mods..!
-An
Sorry about not being around much!
I’ve suddenly had a ton of school work and costume/dress commissions which are all due in the next month or two.
I’ve also had an impromptu moving-house, which has messed things up again.
But I’m still working on the art for the OC’s!
I’ll also do any reviews which are addressed to me.
-Hel
Name: Sanami Ichinaraku.
Age: First Season. *red clothes* - 13-14 years old.
Shippuuden *blue clothes* 16-17 years old.
Character: She can be different xD She can be angry, harmful, annoying xD She also can be smart :’D Talk about life c: Of course she can also be happy, positive. Most of the time she is positive,happy,etc. How I just said she can be angry, annoying. smart, happy. But most of the time she is positive. She had a happy childhood. *even though her parents died when she was 7* She always act silly, like a child. Even now xD Naive, silly, funny/ But she is very smart. I can not say that she achieved Nobel Prizes but it is not deprived of an intellectual :’D But she is kinda clumsy :’D She can rejoice about something, run around house and then hit something :’D She is also very emotional. She take all seriously. No, she is not crybaby. She is not crying about everything.
Little biography:
She had born in Kirigakure and livid in it till she became 7 yeas old. When she was 7 someone attack her clan. Her dad died in fight and mother died under the rubble of stones. Her mother is from Konoha, Huyga clan so when this happen Sanami came to Konoha and livid with Huyga c:
At the second season she left Konoha because she is tired of all the bullshit she had gone through in Konoha D: She wanted to go back to the Kirigakure. But Neji tried stopped her. They start to argue and then start to fight. Both of them were hard hit. Neji was unconsciousness, Sanami was about lose consciousness. But she get up and reached the nearest cave. There she tried to heal the wounds. Suddenly she wasn’t medical ninja so she wasn’t able to do nothing and lost consciousness :’D She waked up somewhere where she don;t know :’D So, this is was Akatsuki lair *MARY SUEEEE* I don’t want to explain other things *because I have not thought of them :’D* She is not akatsuke member c:
Later she will back to the Konoha. But when she will try to go back. Tobi nearly killed her :’D But her friend saved her
She paired up with Tobi :’з
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First off: Personality. Her personality seems very vague. For the most part ll I learned is that she’s childish and feels the regular emotions of a human being. More description here would be WONDERFUL
As for her background, hyuuga would not, NOT allow members of their can to leave to another village. Remember the scene where Hinata was almost kidnapped? It’s a very big deal for the possibility of hyuuga clan secrets getting out, their eyes are very special and it’s dangerous for them to just so casually leave the village. Ninja’s and members of clans can not move from village to village unless you want them to be dissected by enemy ninja to try and steal their secrets.
I would just make her live in konoha. Also, I don’t see any info about her father’s clan. For someone to be in a clan there has to be a reason for them to BE a clan. Some sort of specialty Otherwise it’s just a family (at least by naruto standards. All clans have some specialty jutsu to go along with the clan name).
Also, Hyuuga’s eyes are dominant, she would have the eyes to go with her namesake.
Also, what bullshit? There’s no information. And if she’s a bit childish then why would a serious man like neji try and stop her? The whole clan would stop her. As for the akatsuki, this is not a good idea. And now that Tobi’s identity has been revealed…
In short I would recommend more research, description so I can give a better critic.
Don’t give up!
-An
AnonymousTransformation is one of the first jutsu that we’ve seen. Basic fighting skills and endurance are one of the very first that I know of. For girls flower arrangement and learning the sorts of poisens that can go with them seem important.
-An
